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Mosquitoes

Black Water (Joyce Carol Oates Edition)

Mosquitoes recur as part of the marsh environment surrounding Indian Creek and the Grayling Island Wildlife Sanctuary. They are more than incidental scenery: their presence marks a place where the road, water, and vegetation leave people exposed, and where escape and rescue are made harder.

The Marsh Environment

The narrative places the mosquitoes in a broad wetland landscape of brackish air, black water, and nocturnal insects. Indian Creek runs through this marsh toward a tidal pool and the Atlantic; in places it is eleven feet deep and twenty feet wide. The surrounding habitat is ecologically varied, with birds and marsh plants listed in the account of the federally funded, three-hundred-acre wildlife sanctuary. Against that abundance, the mosquitoes give the setting an immediate, uncomfortable human dimension.

As dusk deepens, the marsh is dense with mosquitoes, fireflies, and tall broom-headed rushes. Kelly Kelleher sees apparently dead trees among them and wonders whether pollution might be killing the trees, but The Senator does not answer. Her speculation remains unconfirmed; the mosquitoes, by contrast, are presented as a direct feature of the place, not as evidence of a specific environmental cause.

The Accident’s Setting

The rented Toyota plunges into Indian Creek on Old Ferry Road, a route no longer maintained by Grayling Township and described as one that should have been closed. The creek and surrounding marsh are difficult to perceive from the road, and the crash occurs without witnesses. Mosquitoes belong to this landscape of limited visibility and isolation: the wetland is not simply a backdrop but part of the conditions that separate the stranded travelers from help.

The Senator’s Flight

After escaping the submerged car, The Senator reaches shore and makes his way back across the marshland toward the highway. Mosquitoes circle and sting him as he limps through the area, adding a further obstacle to his effort to avoid discovery. At the roadside, he hides in the rushes while waiting for traffic to clear, then crosses to a telephone booth. Their recurrence links the marsh’s ecological presence to the aftermath of the accident: the same environment that surrounds the creek also accompanies The Senator’s panicked departure from it.

Narrative Significance

The mosquitoes help make the setting materially consequential. The text specifies the creek’s depth and course, the road’s neglected condition, and the wetland’s insects and vegetation, grounding the crisis in a particular landscape rather than an abstract wilderness. Their appearance during The Senator’s flight also contrasts the natural environment with his urgent concern about political exposure and personal survival. The marsh does not respond to human plans; its insects, water, and terrain persist while the people within it struggle to get out.

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